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Blastile the Sura, loving and strong
once wandered to where she didn't belong
A hostile man carrying an axe
threatened our Blasty with suffering and hacks
Blastile cried 'Leave me alone'.
She was so scared, just wanted to go home
A cave she fell into, dark and long
but aside from the spiders she heard a song

'Don't worry, hun. You are with me'
but it's too dark for you to see
Just because you can't see I'm there
doesn't mean that I don't care'

And so our Blast was much less scared
for anything, she was prepared
knowing that someone is up above
and that they will protect her
with all their love.
©2008-2009 ~Blastile
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Inspired by another person's fantastic poems. I decided to base this upon my Metin char, Blastile.
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The end bit I feel is very nice, coming from me. I usually fade out on endings. This one worked out fine because it had coupled rhymes at the end of each line. Blastile begins in a place that she knows best, but wanders off and ends up in the nasty spider cave.... =(
It's amazing. Absolutly lovey.:hug:

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